hug dogears like that fence was an uncle
means little more than sip and breath.
Say there's a bloom. Say here comes death.
ear necklaces, shrunken heads, and bubbling suet rimhigh in a black skillet, basically all ectopic chicaneries involving hacked off parts; work boots bloodied up trampling the weak; richard petty the goddamn king; whiskeybent hate rants rational and not, profaning nonbelievers and fuel injection; marvelous marvin hagler; arson; accordions; taking up serpents and laying of hands on the sick; cotton-picking, mill-working, bible-busting, coal-mining, iron-wroughting alabama the beautiful.
fierce. i like how you occupy the reader before he can anticipate the rhymes: the "huh" of "hug" following right after the "honeysuckle," the curious word dogears and simile set-up; the unexpected complete thought in the first half of the last line
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