Monday, May 3, 2010

Two Sheets Waiting on a Third

Sitting in Travis watching honeysuckle
hug dogears like that fence was an uncle
means little more than sip and breath.
Say there's a bloom. Say here comes death.

1 comment:

  1. fierce. i like how you occupy the reader before he can anticipate the rhymes: the "huh" of "hug" following right after the "honeysuckle," the curious word dogears and simile set-up; the unexpected complete thought in the first half of the last line

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